Student : The beauty of the language and symmetry, the sentence structure, the word choice : I guess going away from the theme, more of just the language. 语言的优美和对称,句子结构,选用的词:,我想除开主题,我更喜欢它的语言。
Time must also be allowed to revise the draft in order to improve the sentence structure and word choice. 并留有充分的时间修改润饰草稿,以求文字流畅,用词恰当。一个用得不恰当的词。
Read aloud when you revise. When revising, you may hear problems ( of tone, emphasis, word choice, and syntax ) that you can't see. 当你朗读修改时,你可能听出那些不易于看出来的问题。比如说:语气语调,强调部分,一些词语的选择,句法。
For example, ideas are important right away, while word choice becomes more important later on. 例如,你需要首先理清你的想法,然后再考虑词语的选择。
Software is the most malleable resource, he said, an interesting word choice. In order to be in the hunt you need to build devices. 他的用词也非常有意思:软件是最有可塑性的资源,为了参与到‘打猎’中,你就需要制造硬件。